By Team 21
This is a story that Team 21 wrote as we explored the world in stories. We included lots of incredible language features like similes, repetition, and inferencing. We learned a lot about speech marks when we were writing this story.
Ever since the start of the term, the three children
had taken the long way home from school. It would have been easy for each
of them to cross at Bridge Street but every day they left school at Kenderdine
Road, ran across Puhinui Road - How dangerous! - and crossed the railway tracks
at the station. Nobody suspected the reason why Krishay, Brooklyn and
Soldier made their way home like this each day.
The trouble started on the first day of the term.
As usual, the three children were walking across the bridge excited about
seeing their friends again but when they got to the middle of the bridge a
dirty, spindly figure jumped over the railing of the bridge and stopped the
children. It was hard to tell if it was a person or an animal. He
had grey mud all over his face, yellow fang-like teeth and layers of dirty rags
covering its body. It demanded that the children give him their lunch
money to cross the bridge.
Without planning to do it Krishay, Brooklyn and
Soldier turned and ran back to Cambridge Terrace. Brooklyn tripped and
the other two turned to help her up. The despicable figure was following
them but was as slow as a koala with a baby koala on its back. The
children escaped to the safety of their street.
“What should we do?” asked Krishay. “Should we
call the police?”
Brooklyn whispered, “No.” She didn’t want anyone
else to know.
The three friends decided to take the long way to
school and keep the mean person a secret. He didn’t approach anybody
else.
But now it had been four weeks since their terrifying
encounter. After Krishay almost got run over crossing Puhinui Road,
Soldier decided it was time for the three of them to stand up to the odious
man. The friends devised a plan. It was a plan as cunning as a fox
and as simple as breathing.
First, Krishay, the smallest one walked across the
bridge. His knees were knocking when the mean person jumped up to him.
“Give me your lunch money,” he demanded.
“I don’t have any but my friend who is coming across
next has some,” stammered Krishay.
“Ok then, you can cross the bridge,” spat the horrible
figure, “but next time I want your lunch money.”
Next it was Brooklyn’s turn. Her knees were
knocking and her stomach was churning when the nasty man approached her.
“Give me your lunch money,” he demanded.
“I don’t have any but my friend who is coming across
next has some,” stuttered Brooklyn.
“Ok then, you can cross the bridge,” spat the terrible
figure, “but next time I want your lunch money.”
Finally it was Soldier’s turn. He was bigger
than the others and started to walk across the bridge with confidence.
Secretly though his knees were knocking, his stomach was churning and his
teeth were chattering. The creepy figure leapt out in front of Soldier.
“Give me your lunch money,” he demanded.
“Stop!” yelled Soldier. “When my friend comes
you can take his lunch money. He has way
more money than I do.”
“Ok. You may
run along now but next time I want your lunch money!” shouted the man, in a
very angry voice.
Suddenly, Krishay and Brooklyn snuck up in the
back and took the man’s black cap off. They
realised that it was only a kid that just really wanted friends and people to
like him. The next day, the boy came to school and saw his new friends
Krishay, Brooklyn and Soldier. The boy promised that he would never ever
ask for money in his life.